I’m not a joiner by nature, but a few years
ago, notice of a new writing group in town caught my attention. I decided to
give it a try, though I had no experience; and no confidence in myself as a
writer.
We did a lot of fumbling around in the
beginning, trying to find what worked, and fell into writing 150 words, on a
given topic, sharing our efforts with the group.
I wrote poetry and stories for children, so
writing adult fiction was new for me. Soon I was writing short stories, abandoned
the 150 word thing, and let my story go where they needed to go, ignoring word
count. I discovered the joy of fiction writing and wanted to write more and
more, to challenge myself. I wanted to write a book. Imagine that.
It’s been four years since I wrote that
first novel and I recently pulled it out of the drawer to give it another look.
Amazing what you find to do during a heat wave when you can’t do anything else.
I’ve learned a lot about writing in these
intervening years. I’ve read articles and books on writing, and it’s often
said, write what you know, and that’s exactly what I had done. As I worked my
way through that first book I was amazed at how much of ‘me’ was in those
pages. The story was pure fiction, but my female protagonist and I shared many
life experiences.
I didn’t do any real research, but kept to what was familiar. The internet gave me a map of the village I had in mind; and a country drive with a friend gave me the visual for my story’s setting.
This is a photo of the house I used in the book for the lawyer's home and office.
I set up a story binder, for all my character notes, maps, floor plans and photos. As I go along I add notes and ideas. Once the book is done, it all goes in a file, just in case.
Apparently I used a technique in that story
that a ‘How To’ book, said never try for your first effort. Unfortunately I read
that after I wrote the book.
My story was third person, from the female
protagonist’s point of view. I felt her back story was important and wanted to
give it more impact. I took the reader back, not in a flashback, but in a time
shift.
I put this part in italics, gave the date,
and wrote it in first person. I wanted the reader to understand what this woman
had gone through, and what could be better that reading it from her perspective,
as she lived it?
I thought I’d done everything to show the
difference between past and present. There was the change to first person, the
date, and the damn italics. My first beta reader was confused, thought it was a
journal entry. ****
Okay, on second look, I guess that could be
the first thought, but who writes dialogue and such description in a journal. I
did a rewrite, but was not willing to give up the time shift idea; I kept the
italics, the date, and changed it to third person like the rest of the book.
Each time shift was a natural flow from
what was happening in the present. Each journey back gave the reader more of
the character’s life story until the past and present merged, and the reader was
fully aware of why the character felt and behaved as she did.
I think it works, and it must have been
clear as, once the changes were made, there was no more question of it being a
journal entry.
The value of having good beta readers who
will give you honest feedback cannot be measured. That same reader, who thought
it was a journal, also told me the ending sucked. Well, he was nicer, said he
felt disappointed, wanted more.
I did a rewrite, again, because he was
right. I was so anxious to get the book finished, done, over, I rushed the
ending. Lesson learned.
I was proud of that first effort, and did
submit it to ONE publisher, and received a very nice rejection letter in
return. Hence the book in the drawer thing.
Now that I’ve taken time to read it again,
I can see how much I’ve learned in the last few years. The writing group
evolved into a group of book and short story writers, and we are constantly
sharing information, giving feedback and challenging each other to do more than
the 150 word prompts.
I completed the edit/rewrite, and think it’s
a better read now. I like Katie, the main character; she’s a woman I can
respect, we’ve become very good friends
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